I hope you don't mind if I critique this, dear friend~
First off, this looks rather cute. However, the arms look a bit strange... Also, the wotsitcalled muzzle looks a bit off. The eyes also look strange, due to them being very spaced apart in other words 'they look a bit too far from each other'. Now, what's next? The spike on the chest looks ok, but maybe try shading it different to make it look more like the spike is facing at the viewer, since it looks like 'Lapis' is facing the center, so it'll only make sense if the spike faces the center too. Despite all that, this is very cute and I can't want to see more of your art
First off, this looks rather cute. However, the arms look a bit strange...
Also, the wotsitcalled muzzle looks a bit off.
The eyes also look strange, due to them being very spaced apart in other words 'they look a bit too far from each other'.
Now, what's next? The spike on the chest looks ok, but maybe try shading it different to make it look more like the spike is facing at the viewer, since it looks like 'Lapis' is facing the center, so it'll only make sense if the spike faces the center too.
Despite all that, this is very cute and I can't want to see more of your art
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